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29 July 2009 @ 10:06 pm
37. | laughing while i sing  
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James_Padfootjames_padfoot on July 30th, 2009 10:30 am (UTC)
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEG. HOW. HOW ARE YOU EVEN SO. IDEK... IDK IDK OMG. OKAY FIRST. HAHA OMG THIS IS SO PRECIOUS.

I LOVE HOW SUPER OBLIVIOUS ARCHIE IS. I LOVE YOUR ARCHIE VOICE. HAVE I TOLD YOU THAT? PLEASE TELL ME I'VE TOLD YOU THAT.

AND OMG 8 SIMPLE RULES, I FLOVE THAT SHOW UNTL JOHN RITTER DIED THEN I WAS SAD FACED. BUT OMG. AND THE WHOLE FAMILY DYNAMICS AND COOK JUST BEING INTEGRATED THERE AND OMG EVERYTHING AND I FLOVE FLOVE FLOVE THIS. THIS HELPED MAKE MY DAY. I WAS ALL RAGING AND IM SLOWLY CALMING DOWN NOW AND OH YAY ILU AND THIS COMM.
hello beautifulhopefulgenius on July 30th, 2009 03:20 pm (UTC)
LMFAO thank you bb! oblivious archie is my favorite, i confess. okay, i have a bunch of archie favorites, actually. whatever.

:( INORITE? when john ritter died it was like aldkjfa;dkfjadfs WHYYYYYYYY. he totally made that show, so sad. I AM SO GLAD IT HELPED, BB~ i was kind of raging until i sad myself down and wrote it, so i completely understand.
slasher48slasher48 on July 30th, 2009 12:38 pm (UTC)
I think you write perfect Cookleta. Honestly, I do.

And you are possibly the funniest person (with Miss Nat, because I consider you both one person at this point)...

EVER!

So, in conclusion. I love this. So much. Everything about it. Yeah.

And, um. Never. Stop. Writing. I might kill you. Or at least maim you. Well, not you, but probably SOMETHING. Like a bunny rabbit! Oooooooh. Be afraid!

♥ Yeah. It's eight thirty and I haven't slept yet. Forgive me.
hello beautifulhopefulgenius on July 30th, 2009 03:20 pm (UTC)
awww, thank you bb! i'm not really perfect at it, but i do like to think i'm improving. :)

oh my gosh, well, as long as it's to save bunnies i guess i have to keep writing. :)
- slasher48 on September 1st, 2009 09:45 am (UTC) (Expand)
Taylor Annactress_is_me on July 30th, 2009 02:47 pm (UTC)
AHH I LOVE THIS!

IT'S SO GOOD!

AHH WRITE MOOOOREEE!
hello beautifulhopefulgenius on July 30th, 2009 03:21 pm (UTC)
HAHA~ THANK YOU BB~
still waiting: *DEAD OF CUTENESS*etiam_exspecto on July 30th, 2009 04:58 pm (UTC)
AHAHAHAHAHHAHA OH MY GOSH, I LOVED THAT SHOW! (and John Ritter! :((( ) And 8 Simple Rules!Cookleta, EVEN BETTER. I can totally see Jeff sitting down with Cook to have a Talk (well, you know, in that alternate universe where it's totally normal, haha), and David totally spacing out after Cook's big revelation, and AHAHAHHAHA I LOVE THIS A LOT. <333
hello beautifulhopefulgenius on July 31st, 2009 03:55 am (UTC)
YAY~ i'm so glad so many people liked the show, so i don't feel like such a dork. in my head, jeff was totally asking about cook's intentions. he was like "so are you gonna keep just two-stepping around it? because david's never gonna know unless you get it out there. also, touch him and die."

so. yeah. THANK YOU BB~
off_thegroundoff_theground on July 30th, 2009 06:42 pm (UTC)
*MELTS*
hello beautifulhopefulgenius on July 31st, 2009 03:56 am (UTC)
*SWITCHES ON FAN*
unraveled words.: ai: cookleta trl hugmiss_charmed on July 30th, 2009 08:24 pm (UTC)
MEG. HI. HEARTS ALL OVER THIS FIC.
hello beautifulhopefulgenius on July 31st, 2009 03:57 am (UTC)
HI~ ♥ ALL OVER YOU~
penrith1penrith1 on July 30th, 2009 10:52 pm (UTC)
Sweet Loved it.
hello beautifulhopefulgenius on July 31st, 2009 03:58 am (UTC)
glad you liked it! :)
cabayukicabayuki on July 31st, 2009 02:24 am (UTC)
<333 a pile of love for this fic! Can I say AWWWWWWW!!!
hello beautifulhopefulgenius on July 31st, 2009 03:59 am (UTC)
you can! :) thanks bb!
♥L.: archie goshalaszyel on August 2nd, 2009 03:50 am (UTC)
I HAVE NO WORDS SO HERE, HAVE SOME OF YOUR OWN AWESOME, FUCK.

"David," Cook says, snapping his fingers in front of David's face. "Hey, you with me?"

"Yes!" David answers quickly, because Cook is settling onto the couch and not leaving, thank goodness. He sits gingerly next to him and hums unsurely for a second, and then ventures cautiously, "So--"

"So," Cook interrupts, "I just totally got permission from your dad to ask you out. It was kind of awesome."

"..." David takes a moment to just gape at Cook because -- because what? What? What the heck is Cook --

"Daviiiiid," Cook sings, "You're spacing on me again."

"Oh my gosh," David sputters, "You can't say something like that and not expect me to, whatever, space! Which I wasn't, I was more shocked than anything, okay--"

Cook swoops in and presses his mouth to David's open one, just a brief peck that leaves David stunned and his mouth tingling. Then he's leaning back, eyes shining with mirth, and David closes his mouth to just stare helplessly at Cook.

"I think I'm confused," he complains, but he's leaning in with Cook this time, both of their eyes lowering a little.

"Don't worry," Cook breathes against his mouth. "I'll catch you up."


I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU OH MY FUCK.


Gisellealmost_maybe on August 2nd, 2009 07:02 am (UTC)
First, I'm sorry I'm late! RL sort of distracted me.

HAI, IT'S PARTLY DEDICATED TO ME. YOU, I, I DON'T KNOW. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ACTUALLY THOUGHT THAT RANDOM PROMPT WAS EVEN WORTH A SECOND LOOK, MORE SO DEVELOPED INTO THIS WONDERFUL STORY~ ILU MEEEGGG. <333

David says, humming as he draws the spoon out of the bowl (Cook would just toss them all around with his hands but um, ew. No.).


Oh gosh, the little quirks you come up with! It's like you know them PERSONALLY. Here I go again fangirling over your cleverly inserted side notes, but it's one of your signatures that I look forward to.

I love how you repeatedly show how Cook is David's default state of mind. Like everything is somehow related to him, and ohmygosh, it's LOVE even if David doesn't entirely get it yet.

The amount of thought that goes into creating your AUs, and never linear, never just that, it's just-- woah. you make it so effortless and every time I read your fics I catch myself saying, how does Meg come up with these amazing details/backstories? It's BRILLIANT.

Well, okay, there was that one time with the remote last week. And, um, once he'd dazed out and stared at Cook sucking on an ice pop, maybe that was weird. But that was it!

Or, actually, there was that one incident in the pool. But that was just once! And he'd apologized to that silly girl, okay.


I love how you just capture David's flaily nature with just words.

"It's not like I was being subtle or anything," Cook points out, and Dad edges past the two of them muttering, "You've never been subtle."

JEFF TIMING = PURE WIN.

You have Cook being all charming, no matter what age and how can the Archuletas resist that face. He doesn't even need to TRY to win them over, whether they admit it or not.

"I think I'm confused," he complains, but he's leaning in with Cook this time, both of their eyes lowering a little.

"Don't worry," Cook breathes against his mouth. "I'll catch you up."


MY HEART. *flatlines*

YOU MAKE IT SO HARD TO BE COHERENT WHEN YOU END YOUR FICS LIKE THAT. Wait, burning this mental image into memory.

WHO NEEDS CANON WHEN FANFICS ARE THIS GOOD.

ILUSFM MEGGGG~
pixiebeanz: Cookpixiebeanz on August 5th, 2009 10:34 pm (UTC)
hiii, your other comment reminded me i still have to read and reply to this fic too! brb after reading...

okay, this is ADORABLE ♥ hearts; ♥

i think my favourite line is:

"Daviiiiid," Cook sings, "You're spacing on me again."

idk, it made me laugh out loud, oh boooooys, i heart them so <3
It's like egomaniacs leading narcissistsmusicboxgirl on August 14th, 2009 01:24 am (UTC)
AAAAAAAHHHHHH OMG! This is like AMAZING. <3

Cook comes over and grins widely at David when he walks in (without knocking, as usual). He looks amused and happy, which makes no sense whatsoever. Dad sighs at him and beckons for Cook to follow him to the kitchen, which -- David tries to follow but Cook turns around and says, "David."

There's something about his voice that makes David jerk to a halt and Dad watches them with intently. "Cook, what--"

"Me and your dad, we gotta talk," Cook says, the corner of his mouth curving in a hint of a smile. "Just for a little bit, but it's gotta be between us. I'll see you in a minute."

And Dad nods once and Cook squares his shoulders and follows him into the kitchen.

David is speechless.

This had me grinning and giggling and it's just so fucking perfect. IDEK how you do it but you just, you're so amazing!! ♥♥♥♥
hellbent but heaven sent: AI David Squared linebe_merry on October 12th, 2009 02:56 pm (UTC)
*snickers* I really love devious!Cook and oblivous!Archie, like insane amounts. ♥
i'm a painted whorenieliegen on March 12th, 2010 09:05 pm (UTC)
so i really, really love this. and i just- well i sort of had to podfic it, because hi, what an adorable fic to record right?

i hope you don't mind!

http://www.sendspace.com/file/nvxsxa
hello beautifulhopefulgenius on March 13th, 2010 02:18 am (UTC)
!!!!!!

awww, thank you so much! this is so precious, all the rises and falls in your voice and the emotion i can hear is just perfect, and you have such a sweet, soft voice! ♥ this is fantastic, thank you SO SO SO MUCH.
- nieliegen on March 13th, 2010 02:25 am (UTC) (Expand)
pretendhappyend: DCookpretendhappyend on June 9th, 2010 10:21 pm (UTC)
this is so cute it's unreal. omg i'm grinning like a maniac over here. :DDD